Red Mist (part one)

14 thoughts on “Red Mist (part one)”

1. The rain sets the dark, mysterious and hypnotic mood. I like how you reinforced that; it especially lends itself to the man stripping his rifle down again and again and the guy shaving. Old and new scars – I was thinking here that he’s (and the rest) some kind of Robocop and I’m still going with that theory. I think Frazier might regain more of his past memory though. Nice build and intensity.

2. Waiting….

3. I know. Too bad that it's a short and I have to tell the story and wrap things up so quickly.

4. Maybe I'll just end it there to screw with you, John… (haha)

5. You've got to feel sorry for the soldiers, having to go back into the volcano to fight the Hillary Clinton Super PAC. Or maybe they were just shell shocked from watching Jeb! adverts. Either way, no wonder Olga gets short shrift…

6. Jeb! has a secret weapon. It's a clever device that puts people to sleep so that they don't vote. Unfortunately, it impacts Republicans especially hard. Back to the drawing board.

7. Well that's just mean. And I thought you were a nice guy…..

8. WHO TOLD YOU THAT? I want to know which miserable pathological liar is spreading rumors about me?

9. Interesting twist on the thousand yard stare… Having them ALL doing it!

10. More to come.

    >>>Spoiler Alert<<<

    It's not raining.

11. Old NFO beat me to it, but it almost sounds more like a TEN thousand yard stare that they're experiencing…..

12. Something happened…

13. The human brain is a fascinating thing… we don't know half of what we don't know…

14. The waste is a terrible thing to brain. Or something like that.

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