An Angry Virgin

15 thoughts on “An Angry Virgin”

1. Julie honey, leave Virginia. Go to Japan. The Japs adore robots; excuse me, synthetic persons. They like the synthies better than humans. I guess those two nukes we dropped made them mad for latex. You step off the plane dressed in anime cosplay fashion and the spontaneous erections of twenty million Nippon males will knock the earth's axis off by a couple degrees.

   Listen to me Julie sweetie, they'll kill themselves over you. Honest.

   Make a *whirr whirr chunk chunk* noise while you swing your hips and Japanese guys will line up like Rockettes in a Seppuku Follies vignette just to wave their entrails at you.

2. Maybe it WAS the nukes, but you're right.

3. I have to agree with sig94. I also enjoyed Ex Machina.

4. Ex Machina was partially the source of inspiration, without the evil fembot.

5. Strangely, this reminds me of "Ghost in the Shell: Innocence"…..

6. The fembot was pretty evil, I have to say.

7. I haven't read that one.

8. It's a movie…..

9. Yep, Japan…

10. The Japanese seem to have a lot of emotional baggage when it comes to sexual kinks.

11. She lacked a soul.

    The only problem with writing these internet shorts for those who are interested in reading a story in a nut shell is that developing complicated characters in depth is far more difficult. Dialog takes space and while painting a canvas of adjectives can help, I'm not quite there. I may focus on doing that in the next few just to see if I can pull it off.

    Evil Woman may be the next effort in this direction. I'm part way through that one – a girl gets off a bus from Nebraska in Los Angeles (The City of Angeles) in hopes of landing a career in the movies.

12. This is hilarious– the tone is perfect! And the bratwurst ending was brilliant.

13. She's mixing with the wrong crowd. Maybe she needs crowd funding! I can think of many sorts that would want to dip their wick in her given half the chance. Maybe it's me who is mixing with the wrong crowd…..
    Good story. I liked the vibe and the message. You can't replicate the X factor.

14. There are a lot of dungeons in Los Angeles where she'd be the star of the show…but having said that, she's a high school sophomore for heck's sake. (haha)

15. Thanks, Jen

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