A Hammer

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A Hammer
(4500 BC and The Shimmering God,  concluded)
a fictional short

We can only imagine the surprise of the three long boats filled with warriors intent on raiding Tor’s village, when three Walkir drifted over the tops of the waves and directed them to paddle to shore. None of the warriors paddled, all of them cowered, requiring the Walkir to tow them half a dozen meters through a gentle surf to shore. One feeble arrow arced out of the second boat, deflecting from the shimmering armor. The Walkir/target replied by administering an electric shock to the bold archer, causing him to shake and scream. No other arrows were launched.

The Walkir spoke in the common language of the coastal villages, “You will climb to the top of the treeless bluff near the village you had set out to raid. Once there, you will camp and wait.” The voices of the beautiful yet horrifying Walkir pierced them.

At the same time, other Walkir visit all of the villages and hamlets, representing just over a hundred people, inviting them to the meeting, encouraging them to arm themselves for war and cautioning them not to attack their own. The villagers are not quite sure who, “their own” are outside of their hamlets, but they will err on the side of caution.

Meanwhile, in geosynchronous orbit over that region of Earth, the Plarans plan their gifts to The People before they leave to join their own battle fleet eleven light years distant.

Din March told Frie Wrenet, “L.O.K.I. has returned from inserting the chips and the neural nets will grow in their brains over the night. By tomorrow, they will be ready to begin.”

“How can they ever be ready,” Frei asked? She looked down at the night-side of Earth, below. The primitive scene was so different from her home, where lights shined like jewels on the surface of the globe.

“They must form into a warrior people or they will not survive. This first test agent the Neanderthals will inspire confidence and will build precedence in their collective memories, but the rest, well they must do it on their own. We can not be a crutch for them, only enablers who insert seeds along with a few tricks.”

Frei said, “I had hoped for better for them.”

“One good asteroid will wipe them out until they become space faring creatures far in their future. For now, all we can do is turn what threats in space we find for them to dust, and have hope they will survive. They will defend themselves and they will be warriors or they will die even if a mass driver from space doesn’t kill them off. Are they any different than we are? At this very moment we are making final preparations to do what they do. Which reminds me, are we ready to get underway?”

“Yes, everything is in place and the ship can leave orbit on your command.”

“Good, then let us finish with The People and go to fight and live or die.”

L.O.K.I., humanistic robot capable of light-bending
invisibility. Will remain behind as the Plarans depart.

The Shimmering God makes an appearance by floating over the central cave that The People sought refuge in. He makes a terrifying sight, draped in a blood-red cloak with a hood, eyes shining from within the darkness of that hood. Rog and Tor step out of the cave’s mouth. Tor holds his copper hammer aloft, as a sign that he, and those before him have born true faith. 

Both Rog and Tor woke feeling very differently than they had when they went to sleep. They are totally unaware that L. O. K. I. visited them in the night and that even as they stand before the cave, the neural net that will change them forever is completing the final steps of its formation in and around their brains.
The Shimmering God identifies himself as “Din” and he is joined by a second shimmering figure, wearing a sapphire blue cloak. He identifies the second figure as Frei. They are backed by an army of Walkirs, who float motionless above them. Frei reaches what passes for a hand out to Rog and says, “You will come with me!” Rog rises from the ground and ascends with Frei and the Walkir, to the heavens.
Din sets foot on the ground and bids those in the cave to come out. The families came out of the cave as supplicants, slowly and timidly. Din demanded a cup of mead and a smoked, dried fish to eat. 

“Oh Din, great Shimmering God,” Tor said with great ceremony as he presented the fish and mead.

He could not hide his shock as O-Din sat with the people, joked and ate his fish, drank his mead and called for bread and more mead. He placed Tor at his right hand.

“Where is Rog?” Tor could not hide his concern.

“Search your mind, Tor, do you not know where he is?”

Tor closed his eyes, “He is there, in your great home, in a place that I can not comprehend.” He pointed up. “And he is safe and amazed.”

“Give me your hammer, Tor.”

Tor handed him the copper hammer and O-Din took it, handing him another one that glowed when he touched it. “I fashioned this one for you myself but it is very different than the one you held. It is a weapon, it is a teacher and it has power that has been embedded within it. With it you will wield great strength, but all strength and power flows from within you. The hammer is merely an extension of your inner will, combined with a few little surprises that I have included. I call them fireworks, but you don’t know what fireworks are yet.”
Tor hefted the new hammer, “It’s light as a feather.”
“To you. To anyone else on the planet it can not be lifted. Throw it up in the air.”
Tor threw his hammer and it spun up into the clear, cerulean sky. In his mind’s eye he could see what his hammer could see, from above where they stood. The hammer stayed in place, in the sky until he wished to have it back. Then it flew back and hovered before him until he grasped it.
“We do not have much time, Tor. You know of the Old People don’t you?” The term, ‘old people’ applied to the Neanderthals. 
“They are coming in great numbers, and you are going to help your people stop them.” O-Din spoke to all of the people, “Take up your weapons and follow Tor and I. We are going to the top of the round mountain to the East where all of The People from the seashore are waiting for you.”
The People have gathered and set up cook fires. Across the valley there is a hoard of Neanderthals and their tame mastodons with fires of their own. Necromancers bless the Neanderthal warriors under the visage of Mog for the easy victory ahead.
The mood of The People is anything but confident. The Old People are fierce warriors and possess personally strength that few of The People can match. They also outnumber The People three or four to one.
All of the people are shocked at the arrival of O-Din and bow down at the sight of The Shimmering God.
“Your path to eternal feasting, drinking and wenching is through battle!” O-Din speaks slowly and distinctly. “Warriors must die with their weapons in their hand, to show me and all of the Shimmering Gods in the great hall in the sky in order to be admitted!”
The People nod, they understand. At the same time, they look across the valley at what is facing them and they are afraid.
“You need send only one man, Tor, to meet them.” It is only now that they notice Tor, standing roughly half as tall as O-Din, the Shimmering God. Tor will speak for me and Tor will lead you!
The People are not all together sure that Tor is the one they want leading them. They are fiercely independent people and have their own strong men and village chiefs. Those chiefs themselves do not want to be eclipsed by Tor. The more closely they look the more that it appears that Tor, himself, is shimmering. 
Tor, with his hammer. 

Tor walks uncertainly forward, alone, facing the irrepressible force of Old People and their mastodons. The Old People advance irregularly down from their hill as Tor confidently strides toward them, holding his hammer aloft. Lightning flashes up from the hammer into the cloudless sky and the Old People stop, looking at Mog and then at Tor.

Tor threw his hammer. Knowing that he should not claim all the victory for himself. Reducing the Old People to one tenth their number would give somebody for the rest of The People to fight and kill.  He knows that blood shed in this place at the hands of The People is critical to their success.

The hammer did its work, The People charged down from their hilltop with O-Din looking on and they prevailed against the Old People. They tore down Mog’s standard and rallied around Tor, who brought them a victory that they shared in. Only one of the people died in the battle, and The Walkir came from the sky and carried his body away, for he died with a club in his hand.


16 thoughts on “A Hammer

  1. I could do with a visit from L.O.K.I in the night and then I wouldn’t need so much coffee. If I had a hammer…
    I like your style with these shorts – told in a non fiction narrative.

    "Your path to eternal feasting, drinking and wenching is through battle!  ‘aint that the truth.  Not much changes. 

    Well written series with historical fiction/ legend, sic -fi mythology and imagination. 

    Right then, I’m off to fight and live or die.

  2. Good story. But that was then, this is now. All we have to do is launch Yoko at the enemy. Sonic attack is a fearsome thing.

  3. "Your path to eternal feasting, drinking and wenching is through battle! I like this much better than a bunch of virgins nagging all the damn time. And it is a good reward for a battle well fought.

  4. The promise of Valhalla offered Viking men what men from all ages yearn for. A heaven fit for warriors where only the valiant (selected by Valkyries) can enter.

    The progressive heaven with a myriad of rules and angels playing harps would not have inspired the Vikings to greatness, nor would an Islamic paradise with 70 women, too ugly to have been laid while in the flesh.

  5. They're supposed to be "short"… I get your point, though. But when putting them on a blog, I try to keep them short enough to take people's interest while surfing the net. I don't think that blogs are a good place for tomes.

  6. As all of your other short stories, intriguing! Where you get these inspirations I'll never know.

  7. Naturally, both. The great eternal round…what happens has happened. Thus the value of studying history. (though) Naturally this is a work of fiction, not history.

  8. That is high praise and I thank you. I write these for you all to enjoy.

    I hope you enjoy Castor's Garden (going live on this blog on Thursday)

  9. With luck, we will all die with weapons in hand, and be carried to the corpse hall where we can drink, wench and fight.

  10. Fiction allows a brief escape from reality. Reality is important, but it's far more wicked and nefarious than fiction.

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