Evil Woman

4 thoughts on “Evil Woman”

1. I especially liked your anti-hero, Tommy Cut. Perhaps that character won't get written out of the script?

2. Tommy Cut is based on a real person – now dead. After being released from the hospital, he crawled into the dumpster at Anaheim Memorial Hospital because it happened to be the nearest place he could find to take a snooze. Unfortunately for Tommy, he had a full bottle of Ripple (purchased from a convenience store across the street) onboard and slept through the arrival of the trash truck, which compacted him before witnesses who saw a man fall from the dumpster into the truck could stop the process.

3. “Young wasn’t. But neither was he old.” _ A beautifully constructed line, Sir! I love the mix of characters: The clash between the harsh cynic and the naivety of youth. I can smell your stories; you deliver a rainbow of description.

4. Flattery from the master! Thank you Jules.

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