4 thoughts on “Conduct Unbecoming (Part 1)

  1. I hope that you can feel a little saltwater splashing around on this first chapter — and can see it in your mind's eye.

  2. Good start Larry! Love this line -“An illegally parked car in the cul-de-sac of life.”
    Very good. Looking forward to the next instalment. Now need to catch up on everything else – God, I'm so tardy.

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