September 1914 

A fictional short

“He was her dark fairytale and she was his twisted fantasy and together they made magic.” – F. Scott Fitzgerald


(above) Nine European Sovereigns at Windsor for the funeral of King Edward VII in May of 1910, four years before the war began. Standing, from left to right: King Haakon VII of Norway, Tsar Ferdinand of Bulgaria, King Manuel II of Portugal, Kaiser Wilhelm II of the German Empire, King George I of Greece and King Albert I of Belgium. Seated, from left to right: King Alfonso XIII of Spain, King-Emperor George V of the United Kingdom and King Frederick VIII of Denmark. 


Historical Context: 

On 12 August 1914 Austria invaded Serbia. They almost immediately grappled with and fought the Serbian Army at the battles of Cer and Kolubara. Over the next two weeks, Austrian attacks were repeatedly thrown back with heavy losses, which marked the first major Allied victories of the First World War and dashed Austro-Hungarian hopes of a swift victory. 



The morning after brought a day that would be filled with grim irony and empty gestures, but that isn’t the way that my last night with her ended.

Yesterday Miss Steinberg, the Ambassador’s correspondence secretary brought me word of a meeting that I was to attend. She has very tender nerves from a lifetime of insignificant field work and I felt her to be completely unsuitable for delivering secret messages, which is why the Office recalled her to the Embassy. Miss Steinberg, prone to hysteria over small matters, somehow survived working for the British Secret Service long enough to be eligible for a pension. One should not be too surprised, we British always cherish the eccentric.

I sat in my office on the second floor of His Majesty’s Consulate in Saltzburg, chatting with Colin Ramsey, the third cultural attache, who as you know, is not a spy. He’s precisely what his title suggests. As a large, heavy, convivial man in his mid-sixties, Colin made the most of what he had left, styling his thick white hair into a pompadour and wearing suits cut locally, remaining painfully within his means. You met him once, I think. Remember him from the Press Club? He always smells of bay rum and cigars. He has burned a secret flame for Miss Steinberg for years. She can’t abide him. He fantasizes about her cheap perfume, imagining filthy nights of love making and has confessed his love publicly in the past when he’s in his cups. It revolts the Ambassador’s correspondence secretary, as well as the rest of us since he shares his feelings regularly with the staff now that he’s apparently reaching his dotage.

When she entered my office without knocking, Colin stood, the soul of chivalry, and she looked at him over her half moon reading glasses in the same way as a librarian would if you spoke out of turn. She’d lost weight since I last saw her. Thin as a rail with caved in shoulders and a mouth that had that puckered look that you can get from eating too many persimmons. When she saw me, a warm light radiated over her face and the stress lines softened even if only slightly. When she looked back at Colin, the light turned back to ice.

After Colin excused himself and he’d pulled the door closed behind him, she spoke. “You’ve been gone a long time, sir.”

She should have known better because a cue such as that one, inviting discussion about what one did or where one went was simply not done. Catching herself, she continued, “Carl, the Ambassador wants you to meet with that awful man, Otto, tonight.” She reached out and touched my hand softly, much as one would reach out to caress a cat, which shouldn’t be strange to you since you know that if Miss Stinberg loves anything on Earth, it is those damned Angora cats that she keeps cooped up in her flat. The place always has that lingering odor of cat piss because they’d flee if she left the window open.

The meeting required an evening stroll. Instinct required that I carry an umbrella. Local expedience required that I not. It simply looks far too British. Therefore, dressed in local kit, I set off. Local kit is a gray London suit, Homburg and no spats for the shoes.

Every kiosk had recruiting posters pasted to them. The government decided to levy the population to make up for heavy losses at the front. There is nothing quite like profound defeat to throw a wet blanket on recruiting efforts. I didn’t endure sideways glances from people. I’m too far past my prime to camp comfortably with an army. I did that during the Anglo-Zanzibar War, installing a pro-British Sultan and then during Anglo-Boer War, watching my men fall to sniper fire, and didn’t like it much in either instance, which is why I joined the political service as a spy. Diplomatic cover offers a better grade of bed linen, better meals, and a more diverse choice of female companionship.

I had to walk past a small legion of prostitutes to get to the restaurant where Otto proposed the meeting that cycled through the Ambassador and down to me. The length of the war could be effectively measured by the length of the harridan’s natural colored hair, tipped by a few inches of blonde. As soon as hostilities broke out, all of the peroxide had been diverted to the effort.

The newspapers in Saltzburg still rested on their stands as the sun set. Nobody wanted to read about casualties at the front. It struck home very directly. Telegrams informing families of their personal loss had been delivered and the front lines had turned from costly frontal attacks to a static defense as Austria reeled with the news that the Serbs thumped them again and again. It made we British less than popular in all the right social circles since as you know, we are allied with the Serbs.

I met the contact in a seedy part of town, which is hard to find in Saltzburg. He called himself Otto, but I don’t think that is the name he was born with. As you know, I call myself Carl these days, but it’s not my birth name either. Fair is fair.

Otto looked very much the way you’d expect the tuba player in a Polish oompa band to look. He was muscle gone to flab, mid-way between 5 and 6 feet, and dressed like a salesman who is down on his luck. It made perfect sense because until hostilities broke out and war profiteering brought the promise of economic resurrection, he’d been a failed salesman. Things changed when the Serbian scoundrel shot Arch Duke Ferdinand.

Otto wore a tweed sports coat, American import polyester tie with a hand painted hula girl on it, trousers tucked along the bottom of his portly belly and run down heels on unpolished shoes. He’d greased down a few strands of dirty blonde hair over his bald pate. His woman wasn’t unlike Otto. She had the unfortunate genes that destined her to a life of obesity. Either that or she couldn’t take the fork out of her mouth. Whatever the cause, fat jiggled east, west and south when she walked north. Maybe one day she had pretty eyes. Now they squinted to see through a puffy face that topped three chins. They were feral pig’s eyes.

“Carl, you came. I knew that you would, you Alsatian bastard.” I spoke German with an Alsace-Lorraine accent and Otto made the cultural leap. Otto greeted me grandly with a sweaty hug. The restaurateur apparently didn’t know that there was a war because he burned coal in the big stove in the back of the place as if there was no end to it. I had to take my coat off, and it revealed a brace of American made Colt .32-20 revolvers. It wasn’t one of those restaurants where anyone took notice of them. “I’m surprised that you weren’t delayed by the women of the town.”

“Whores don’t appeal to me,” I replied, somewhat confidentially. “A woman’s passion is the greatest aphrodisiac.”

“Of course,” Otto said, taking note of his wife’s beefy scowl. The scowl faded as she shoved a whole bratwurst into her maw. “As you know, I feel just the same as you. Help yourself to bratwurst, sauerkraut and beer.” He shouted to the waiter, “more bread for the table and for my friend the count.”

I am not a count, though others used that title when referring to me in the past. Otto liked to use it to improve the service. Otto also thought that I came from Alsace Lorraine, and did not suspect that my parents birthed me in Kent. That he understood that I enjoyed some sort of tacit relationship with the British should be understood at this point in the narrative.

I forked a sausage and sauerkraut onto my plate. The waiter brought a large stein of beer. Otto leaned across the planked table conspiratorially, “And what do you think of the woman?”

Now would be a good time to fill you in on the whole matter since England favors Serbia and Germany favors Austria-Hungary. King George, Kaiser Wilhelm and the Czar of Russia are all family, but as with many families, they are not on the best of terms.

King Petar I, monarch of Serbia is not well and has backed off many decisions of state, favoring his son Prince Aleksander Karađorđević. All well and proper, but for the issue of royal children fathered out of wedlock. King Petar’s oldest child a daughter, had been born one year before Prince Aleksander, and though tacitly acknowledged by her father, the king, who loved her, she steadfastly refused to leave Saltzburg. And that explains  is why His Majesties Secret Service sent me to town. The Serbians wanted her repatriated to Yugoslavia with or without her consent and they reached out to an ally to accomplish the deed.

It always rolls downhill onto somebody. In this case, it’s me, which is why I watched Otto’s uncomfortably obese wife stuff brat after brat into the gash in her fat face that passed for a mouth. Otto was one of the few people who knew where King Petar’s issue, Maria Petra lived at the moment.

As Otto and I ate our way toward a rendezvous with history, I recalled a clandestine meeting – between Maria Petra, the King’s bastard daughter, and me. It took place over three years ago in a tea room next to the Seine, famous for Mont Blanc pastry and hot chocolate. She scooped a delicate spoon full of noodle strands of cream of chestnut that flowed over the whipped cream that topped her chocolate beverage. When she closed her lips on the spoon, it resulted in a dainty smear of creme de marrons on her upper lip that I leaned over and kissed off.

She dressed for the occasion in a pale blue blouse that matched her eyes. A strands of dark pearls circled her long neck and held a cameo. She wore her chestnut tresses back, twisted into a chignon. I delighted in removing her blouse fifteen minutes later, but told her to keep the pearls on. We were in Paris, it’s what was done.

By the time we left her flat, tea time had long passed and the day gave way to the City of Lights.

Between then and now I’d worn out my welcome and she had worn out hers, so nobody knew how it would fall out between us. Back then, the Service would have used me and would have used our relationship for the benefit of Old England if they’d read the tea leaves. However, at the time she held no particular importance to them. There was no dead Arch Duke back then to change the world.

There was nothing but she and I, you see. Nothing but the two of us because as a Serbian bastard with an adequate trust fund, she blended into Parisian anonymity. My anonymity is far more studied, but during our dance together, we whirled in a world without end until duty called and I took ship to New York City, as she entrained to Vienna.

And now, you understand why they didn’t follow normal protocol. You clearly grasp why the Ambassador involved himself personally as well as why His Majesty’s government singled me out to sit in a smokey gasthaus with Otto and his starving wife in a poor quarter in Saltzberg. People had begun hunting Maria and they wanted me to hunt better than those shadows at night that haunt the ancient streets and alleys. The hand of fate fit as snugly as a glove if only for one night.

Portly Otto and I bade a farewell to his wife. She saw us off with a wet belch, which had not been followed by a napkin and a wave of one chubby mitt. After the wave, she slugged down half a stein of warm beer.

We synced into a leisurely pace down the pavement as Otto began his sales pitch. There was no way that he wouldn’t maximize our time together on the way to meet Maria.

“Have you heard of the Flammenwerferapparaten?”

I had not and told him as much. Doing a quick translation to English, I switched into my native tongue, “Flame thrower?”

“I am selling them for Herr Fiedler, for use by the Wermacht.”

“What does it look like and how does it work,” I asked, switching from rescuer to spy on the fly.

“It is a single tank one meter long that is carried by a man. There are two sections within that tank. One contains pressurized gas and the other contains flammable oil. When you depress a lever, the propellant gas forces the oil through a tube and over a simple igniting wick in a steel nozzle. It produces a jet of fire eighteen meters long–most impressive.”

“I take it that you think that the Allies might also have an interest in this device?”

“Of course. I am a profiteer, not a nationalist. It’s all about getting a fair price.”

I put a comrade’s arm around Otto’s shoulder and told him sincerely, “That’s why I love you, Otto. Now tell me about Maria.”

“I spoke to her just yesterday and told her that I would bring you to her.”

“How did she take it?”

“Surprise mostly. She asked if you had married. Naturally I said that you had not and that I suspected you have been burning a candle for her these past years. She smiled and in her smile I saw her father’s smile. Warm, garrulous and a bit mischievous.”

Now, back to you.

You predicted that we’d find a way to get back together, but all of your card turning and palmistry didn’t envision this did you? A magnum of very fine champagne and then a quick tryst for old times sake that devolved into three hours of rough sex, followed by oysters and more champagne. A diplomatic car arrived and I drove her to Serbia in the boot. The Americans call it a trunk — how quaint.

I sent a cable and members of the Serbian Royal Household met her on their side of the border. People have different predictions. Some say that the war will be over in a week, a month at the most, as the Austrian army keeps hemorrhaging. Then I’ll see her again.


  1. Nice short story. One little thing though. Pretty sure polyester was a WW2 invention, not WW1.
    Really have enjoyed the past several stories you’ve posted.

      • Another anachronism was ‘Wehrmacht‘, which only existed from 1935-1945. The Imperial German Army was the Deutsches Heer, which was succeeded by the Weimar Rrpublic’s Reichswehr.

    • I was actually willing to believe that Larry knew more about that than I.
      The British scientists John Whinfield and James Dickson first invented polyester cloth in 1941 in England. Wiki

    • The Viking is right, and I missed the mark, but am glad you’ve enjoyed it. Just trying to lighten things up a bit. Too much virus stuff floating around at the moment. Too depressing.

  2. That was great. Just like with Red Mist: more please!

    Either flesh some of these stories out (or “the further adventures of…”), or throw them all together in a collection–even as a e-book.

    • There are a few of these. And because it’s a blog, it’s three or four pages to a story at best. People don’t want to read longer stories – or even essays. So it’s a plot, fleshed out a bit, and a twist.

      Due to popular demand, I’m working on fleshing out Red Mist and have 25 pages chopped out, with the portion you read, acting as a prologue. But that is WAY too long for a blog. In the expanded plot, the Chinese have begun below ground nuclear testing and nobody knows why. Of course, I know why and how it fits into red mist and other twists. Building that into a coherent story takes a lot of time and effort.

      I shifted to some of these shorts, as explained above, because the pandemic is depressing and I don’t want to heap whining on a subject that is being endlessly whined about.

      Jackhammer is in the cue and there will be others, but because of the nature of the blog, they have to be short. They all have the grist to be larger works, but the sad truth is that novels that take six months or a year to write, may (on a good month) pay for lunch for two. More often, lunch for one.

      Thank you for commenting. There are more shorts coming. Some will be new, and some will be re-prints of shorts that appeared on this blog some time ago.

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