Castor’s Garden

21 thoughts on “Castor’s Garden”

1. I enjoyed that. Let's hope, for his sake, that the former soldier didn't find himself in the White House.

   No, wait, maybe that'd be good. He has a sword.

2. That photo is of the Roman Baths in Bath, I’m sure.

   Good story, nice detail. I have a penchant for Roman stories. It was probably the Doctor Who Tardis that he went into.

   A very nice twist.

3. ahhhh…. more quantum foaming!

4. Cue John Denver:
   "Quantum foam, take me home,
   To the place I belong…"

5. I'm working on a trilogy of shorts set in ancient Rome, so you might like those.

6. I wanted to take this story further, but if I had, it would not be a "short".

7. But do they come back? Damn! There ya go making me use my imagination again. What if they came back with an M1 Grand or an M16 or a M249 SAW? Or a cigarette lighter? Or not at all… Dammit!

8. I like the short, but would also be happy to read the "long".

9. Another good one, but…
   geez the surf must be up, cause they are gett'n shorter not longer…

10. ROTF, love the ending! :-)

11. They'll be back with more belching tourists who want to murder somebody or want to have congress with slave girls.

    Can Lucinnius come back? The question begs the postulate that if he (and the other four) don't come back that people won't be born, etc. and it changes the future. The slave scheduled for execution that is killed is another thing. Or maybe the prostitute slave girls become pregnant and the guy is his own great, great, great, great grandfather?

12. It's tough pandering to my readers and knowing whether you all want more or less.

13. Thx, Jim.

14. Maybe we can work on that from this end.

15. I second Jenny, but not too long. Our friend simply arrives in the Oval Office — note story arc thematic tie/in with gubernatorial Roman baths — with his gladius and works his way through.

    How he ends up in Austin with the time travelers is another episode.

16. To answer if we want more or less the answer is YES!

17. Just face it Life is hard… if you're a panderer…
    So, write more shorts, please.

18. Ok, I'll make them shorter.

19. Ok

20. only make them longer!
    ;)

21. Working on it.

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